sealie ([info]jimandblair) wrote,
@ 2006-04-27 22:01:00
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Entry tags:sga/traders, sga_fic

SGA/traders snippet
“Ma’am.” The marine passed over the stranger’s wallet.

Carter flicked through the leather wallet pulling out Grant Jansky’s credit and business card. A security swipe card showed a picture of the man before her. At the back of the wallet where bills should live was a sheaf of well-thumbed photos. Sam extracted the first one and grinned.

“Who’s this?” Sam asked even though she knew the answer. Two boys stood as close as skin, knock-kneed and grinning cheekily with wide, wide mouths. The photo was faded, but Sam would have laid a bet that the eyes framed by those long lashes were sea blue. The shock of light, curly hair was a practical joke waiting to happen. Sam’s day wouldn’t be complete if she couldn’t get a scan of this photo and post it on the SGC intranet.

Grant leaned out of the marine’s grasp to peer at the upside down, dog-eared photograph. “That’s me and Rodney at Mrs. Anderson’s, before Rodney went back to Auntie Ruthie and I went into the ‘system’ never to get out.”

“That’s Rodney all right, but there isn’t an ounce of fat on him. On either of you,” Sam smiled.

“Jeannie was a bit skinny too, but Auntie Ruthie liked her more so she got treats sometimes.” Carter’s fingers flicked through the sheaf of photos and withdrew a second photo of three stick-thin creatures staring at the lens, the downward slanting mouths were as belligerent as sin. The contrast between the two photos was horrible.

“The…”

“Auntie Ruthie wasn’t well, but she got medication and got better. And then Jeannie and Rodney had to go back and live with her. But I was her only her nephew and I didn’t go back.” Grant looked at her directly. “I think I was the lucky one.”




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[info]betagoddess
2006-04-27 11:23 pm UTC (link)
Cool! Are you going to write a full story of this Xover? Just wondering. =>}

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[info]jimandblair
2006-04-29 02:03 pm UTC (link)
sort of, yeah

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[info]mangst
2006-04-28 02:03 am UTC (link)
Wow, for just a little snippet it sure explained alot. It explained how Grant would have been in foster care even if he had family. It explains Rodney's hypoglycemia (real or imagined. It could be real because his body was just so messed up from being starved. It could be psychosomatic, and he's now paranoid about being denied food). I hope this gets added into the universe you've been building so far.

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[info]jimandblair
2006-04-29 02:07 pm UTC (link)
in so far as much as, it's a part of the ideas that I have. How it will fit into the larger picture, I don't really know. I suspect it will have to be tweaked a wee bit. Rodney, to me, comes across as a person who didn't have a lot a good things happening to him as a kid, neglect rather than focused, deliberate hurt. Hence the snippet

*burble* I'll go and stand in the corner. I don't normally post snippity stuff, but this seemed to take a life of its own.

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[info]lky
2006-04-28 02:20 am UTC (link)
I don't think I like Auntie Ruthie....

Nice scene. *G*

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[info]2naonh3_cl2
2006-04-28 09:46 am UTC (link)
oh my god. please tell me that there's more to this. O.O poor grant! poor RODNEY!!! the sgc intranet line was cute. thank you for sharing!

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[info]jimandblair
2006-04-29 02:08 pm UTC (link)
you're welcome. I can see Sam doing0 that.

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[info]klostes
2006-04-28 03:26 pm UTC (link)
You know, I never thought I'd ever say this, but I think I want to slap Sam here, for being so damn nosy! Just because it's Grant and she can get away with it... Grrrrrrr.

Lovely vignette, and an awesome amount of heartbreaking backstory in so few words. MORE! ;-)

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[info]titc
2006-05-14 06:06 pm UTC (link)
I really like this series! The idea is original and it really works, I think.
*friends*

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[info]jimandblair
2006-05-21 02:53 pm UTC (link)
happy to be friended *G*

i've just posted a new snippet

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[info]korilian
2007-08-22 12:46 pm UTC (link)
I really hope you run with this in the overal x-over. Even if you keep it in the background. It ads a spice of angst to the sweetness and light between Rodney and Grant (mind, the universe is doing a good job with the angst as well ;)

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[info]jimandblair
2007-08-22 02:15 pm UTC (link)
yeah, I hope so. Once I discovered that Grant had been in foster care (canon), I needed a reason why his relatives couldn't look after him. Running with a family history of mental illness worked within that framework. I think that you're right though, it is more of an ingredient in the recipe rather than a story line. But who knows; I'm frequently surprised by the tangents that I wander down while writing!

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